Q&A: Is this sentence correct ? plz how to correct it ?or rewrite it?
Question by jaleel j: Is this sentence correct ? plz how to correct it ?or rewrite it?
Mullaperiyar dam a water bomb
A century old weak dam will broke any movement it will create unpredictable disaster in Idukki District of kerala .government of Kerala is not ready to make new dam it is dispute between two Indian states of India. Tamil nadu government not allow to rebuild new dam because they depend this dam for water. This dam is leaking these days widely.more then 25 lakh people live rivar side if not make new dam it will effect people life and property.dam and its surrounding areas is beautiful placese .thosusand tourists visiting here daily . the dam got international media attention because of dispute and its weak condition
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Answer by Kat
A century old weak dam, will break at any moment and it will create unprictable disaster in Idukku District of Kerla. The goverment of Kerla is not rady to make a new dam, it is a dispute between two indian states of India. Tamil Nadu government will not allow to rebuild a new dam because they depend on this dam for water. This dam is leaking widely these days, more then 25 lakh people live rivar side .If a new dam isnt built it will affect peoples lives and property. The dam and its surrounding area are beautiful placess, thousands of tourists visit here daily, the dam recieved internatiol attention os its dispute and weak condition.
mispelled sme stuff. but grammars right!
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A century-old and weak dam will break any moment. It will create an unpredictable disaster in Idukki District of Kerala. The government of Kerala is not ready to make a new dam because it is in a dispute between the two Indian states. Tamil Nadu government will not allow a new dam to be made because they depend on this dam for water. The dam is leaking a lot these days. More than 25 Lakh people live on the river side, and if a new dam is not made it will affect these peoples’ lives and propery. The dam and its surrounding areas are beautiful places. Thousands of tourists visit daily. The dam received international media attention because of the dispute and its weak condition.
No. It’s very poor English. You have missed out too many words “the”, “and”, “in”, “by” etc. “will broke” is nonsense. Try this instead:
Mullaperiyar dam – a potential disaster.
A hundred year old weakened dam might break at any moment and cause a potential disaster in the Idukki District of Kerala. However, the government of Kerala is not ready to rebuild it, as they are still in dispute with two other Indian states. The Tamil Nadu goverment will not allow the rebuilding of a new dam because they depend on the current dam for water even though it is leaking. More than twenty five Lakh people live by the riverside. If the government does not replace the dam soon, it may affect the life and property of those people. The dam and its surrounding areas are beatiful. Thousands of tourists visit the area every day. It has recently received international media attendon because of the dispute and the weakened condition of the dam.
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You need to learn how to use the definite article “the” and how to use prepositions like “in”,”by” effectively. You need to learn more about English verbs – “will” versus “might” and how to conjugate English verbs so that they agree with the subject of the sentence. You also need to polish up on how tenses are used in English.
I hope that is of some help to you.
Mullaperiar Dam, a water bomb.
A century old weak dam will break any moment. It will create unprecedented disaster in Idikki District of Kerala. The government of Kerala is not ready to make a new dam as it is a dispute between two states of India. The Tamil nadu government does not allow the rebuilding of a new dam because they depend on this dam for water. This dam is leaking widely these days. More than twentyfive lakhs of people live on the riverside. If a new dam is not made, it will affect the people’s life and property. The dam with the surrounding area is a beautiful place. Thousands of tourists visit this place daily. The dam got international media attention because of the dispute and its weak condition.
The facts mentioned are not true. Correct the content before correcting the grammer.
The publications was part of cheap politics.
if the dam is in poor condition it is unsafe to Tamil Nadu too. Tamil Nadu govt would have support initiatives to reconstruct it if it is really weak. According to reports from unbiased experts dam is in quite good shape.